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Have I created a devastating rhyming masterpiece? This is why I can, this is why you can't This is why I will, this is why you ain't. Cuz I got an education, I can spit big words, That's why I'm spitting rhymes kinda like you never heard. This is why I jam, this is why I roll, Dis is why you know this brotha got soul. Spitting like I'm gold, man you been told, don't mess with dis G or else you'll be cold, lying in the ground, you won't be around, cause you done met the most intelligent spitter in town. You done been told, you done been warned, don't mess ... (Asked by iconoclast12)
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keep going man!...(Answered by Deni)

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Rewording a sentence? how can i reword this to make it shorter and make more sense? On May 12, 1932 the Lindbergh’s received devastating news. Charles Jr.’s body was found in the woods, nearly two miles from the Lindbergh home. Even though the body to Charles Lindbergh’s infant son had been found, the police department still hadn’t found the man who had pulled the trigger on the gun that killed Charles Jr., with a single bullet to the head. ... (Asked by Jamie)
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How about: On May 12, 1932 the Lindberghs received devastating news. Charles Jr. had been found in the woods nearly two miles from the home with a single bullet to the head. Even though the infant's body had been found, the person who pulled the trigger and killed Charles Jr. has not been indentified....(Answered by Katy B)

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When was the last time you were "devastated"? Apparently, we use the word too much these days. ... (Asked by Ms. T)
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When my 17 year old son was killed in a road accident 3 years ago....(Answered by jean m)

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Please read this paragraph and tell me if the word pandemic is not properly used? In lands infested with poverty, it can be very difficult to survive. In the short story Rashomon by Ryunosuke Akutagawa, the meaning concentrates on the consequences of extreme poverty. The city of Kyoto is devastated by this pandemic; consequently, dehumanization, distortion of the human spirit, and a lack of compassion are all burdened as messages about the consequences of extreme poverty. I used pandemic because that would be the 3rd time I used poverty. Does pandemic fit do you think? Thanks and when re reading that intro it is kinda redundant and stuff so does anyone have any tips on what I ... (Asked by Fernesta)
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The word pandemic is used properly...I, personally would write it like this though to help remove the redundancy. The word extreme is over-used too. Sometimes when you are writing, it helps to be more concise. I changed a couple of words. Hope this helps. In lands infested with poverty, it can be very difficult to survive. In the short story Rashomon by Ryunosuke Akutagawa, the meaning concentrates on the consequences of radical impoverishment. The city of Kyoto is devastated by this pandemic; consequently, dehumanization, distortion of the human spirit, and a lack of compassion are all burdened as messages about ...(Answered by Darwin)

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how does this sound so far? and what does it need? I was devastated, how could this happen? How could I let this happen? Guilt. What a horrible, hideous word. I never thought emotions could hit you like a ton of bricks, but that claim is 100% true. She had always seemed so happy or so I thought. I stared, I couldn’t help it my eyes were glued on the multiple scabs and scars on her wrist and arm. I wanted to look away but I couldn’t. Human instincts, I had seen a show on this before I found it disgusting how we as humans were drawn to horrible things, yet ... (Asked by gabby p)
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Ok. Well, you're on the right track. You need to work on your grammar. As is, you're pegging in the red in the check mark meter. Also, if you use too many metaphors or comparison type statements in one paragraph it gets muddy. Do a google on How to write fiction and you'll get tons of tips to help you along. The library also has lots of books to guide you through the stages of writing. Good story telling is a process that takes a bit of practice and starts with an outline. Keep writing. As I said at first, ...(Answered by hairdvs)

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