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can u edit this essay please? Slowly but steadily, the sun arose that day. With a sigh, I unenthusiastically prepared for ans. As I was heading to the school I realize that this was going to be a tough year. Unfortunately, my fifth grade year was a horrible year, one of my worst at A.N.S. This was due to my grades, which were always below average, often in the twenty and fifty percent range. When this nightmare began it was all indistinguishable, I was so sightless that I didn’t even realize what was happening around me. In addition to getting horrible scores, I also paid ... (Asked by benpachec)
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I think the essay sounds really good! The only thing that I found wrong with it was: some of your grammar is off, and sometimes you put the wrong word in, i.e. "their" instead of "there." Also, your tenses change; you need to stay in the same tense throughout the whole essay. For this case, use past tense. I found it descriptive and interesting! Oh, and also indent your paragraphs....you may know this already....(Answered by christina rose)

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Suppose you buy a new duplicator for $12000. It depreciates steadily at 11% per year. At this rate of deprec show the work please... ... (Asked by slow_girl)
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12,000(.11)=1320 The first year depreciation -1320 10680(.11)=1174.80 second year depreciation -1174.80 9505.20(.11) and so on.......(Answered by dwinbaycity)

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